Very impressive. Hard to understand her at some parts. but besides that The intrumental music is sublime.
this would fit perfectly into a musical.
To much going on, and all the levels seem to be equal, I personally would lower the synth. maybe try a highpass filter on the vocals so it doesn't sound so bassy and its more clear.
Seems just fine to me. Vocals sound fine to me too. Maybe you just have a bass intolerance? Sorry to hear that you've got such a horrible medical condition ):
Also, this coming from the guy who clearly doesn't even know how to master his tracks so that they peak at 0db. Niiiice. yeah I don't need criticism from someone who doesn't know what they're talking about, sorry.
Good use of distortion.
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